盛年憂國鬢毛蒼，諫疏端堪銘豆觴。
行或使之苗膏雨，心乎愛矣藿傾陽。
榮華不與群兒競，名節須留千載長。
試看丹青閣中句，吾宗有此好元方。
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詩歌內容
白話文翻譯
正當盛年卻爲國事憂心，鬢髮已然斑白；
他直言進諫的奏章，真值得刻在酒器上銘記。
他的作爲如同及時雨，滋潤著禾苗；
他的內心充滿敬愛，如同葵花向著太陽。
他不與衆人爭奪榮華富貴；
名聲與節操必須流傳千載。
試看這丹青閣中的詩句——
我們家族就有這樣賢德的元方。
英文翻譯
In his prime, worried for the country, his temples turned gray;
His earnest admonitions are worthy to be inscribed on wine vessels.
His actions might bring timely rain to nourish the seedlings;
His heart, full of love, turns like sunflowers to the sun.
He does not contend with the crowd for glory and splendor;
His good name and integrity shall be preserved for a thousand years.
Just look at the lines within the Pavilion of Painting—
Our clan has such a worthy man as Yuanfang.
深度解構
諫疏銘觴展現了士大夫的政治認知與擔當。
詩意解析
詩意概括
抒發盛年憂國之情，諫言忠直可銘史冊。
格律
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本詩為七言律詩，押平聲韻。
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