開緘奕奕滿銀鉤，書尾題詩語更遒。
八法舊聞宗長史，五言今復擬蘇州。
筆蹤好在留臺寺，旗隊遙知到石溝。
欲寄鼠鬚並繭紙，請君章草賦黃樓。
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詩歌內容
白話文翻譯
展開信箋，你靈動有力的字跡布滿紙面，如同銀鉤般閃耀，
信末題寫的詩句，語言更加遒勁豪邁。
早就聽聞你繼承張旭的八法書法傳統，
如今你的五言詩又堪與韋應物（曾任蘇州刺史）相比擬。
你筆墨的蹤跡，想必還留在留台寺中吧，
遙想你的旌旗隊伍，應該已經到達了石溝。
我想寄給你鼠須筆和蠶繭紙，
請你用章草字體爲黃樓賦詩一首。
英文翻譯
Unsealing the scroll, I find your vibrant script adorning the page like silver hooks,
The poem inscribed at the end speaks with even more vigorous and forceful strokes.
Long have I heard of the Eight Methods, a tradition from the Master of Calligraphy,
Now your five-character lines rival those of the poet from Suzhou, so classic and free.
The traces of your brush, I trust, are well preserved at the temple where you stay,
Your banner-bearing troops, I know from afar, have reached the Stone Gulch's way.
I wish to send you a weasel-hair brush and silken paper, fine and sheer,
And beg you, in cursive script, to compose an ode to the Yellow Tower here.
深度解構
書信往來中的詩藝切磋，是精英羣體內部的一種認知互動。
詩意解析
詩意概括
展讀友人來信，贊賞其書法詩藝，表達惺惺相惜之情。
格律
平平仄仄仄平平，平仄平平仄仄平。
仄仄仄平平仄仄，仄平平仄仄平平。
仄平仄仄平平仄，平仄平平仄仄平。
仄仄仄平平仄仄，仄平平仄仄平平。
仄仄仄平平仄仄，仄平平仄仄平平。
仄平仄仄平平仄，平仄平平仄仄平。
仄仄仄平平仄仄，仄平平仄仄平平。
本詩為七言律詩，押平聲韻。
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