碧樹陰濃釦砌平，華亭歸夢曉頻驚。
仙經若未標奇相，琴操何因寄恨聲。
養氣自憐雞善勝，全身卻許雁能鳴。
芝田玉水春雲伴，可得乘軒是所榮。
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詩歌內容
白話文翻譯
綠樹投下濃蔭，雕飾的台階平坦寧靜；
夢中歸返華亭，總在拂曉時分屢屢驚醒。
倘若仙家典籍未曾標舉它奇異的形貌，
琴曲《別鶴操》又怎能寄託這悲恨的聲情？
涵養元氣，自顧憐惜，雞雖善斗又何足道；
保全身軀，卻自認不如，雁尚能鳴叫傳警。
在靈芝田邊、玉水之畔，與春雲相伴徜徉，
難道乘坐華貴車駕，就是它所追求的榮名？
英文翻譯
Green trees cast deep shade, the inlaid steps lie level and still;
Dreams of returning to Huating Pavilion are startled by dawn, again and again.
If the Taoist scriptures had not marked this form as wondrous and rare,
How then could the "Lament of the Crane" convey such a sound of sorrow?
Nourishing its vital breath, it pities the cock's skill in winning fights;
Preserving its whole body, it yields to the wild goose's ability to cry.
By the fields of magic fungus, by jade-like streams, it companions spring clouds—
Could riding in a carriage be considered its glory?
深度解構
歸夢頻驚折射出仕隱抉擇的認同困境。
詩意解析
詩意概括
以鶴寄託歸隱之思與對自由高潔的嚮往。
格律
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仄仄仄平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平。
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本詩為七言律詩，押平聲韻。
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