痴儿才五岁，器局稍精明。
弄笔夸郎罢，窥鸾效女兄。
顾瞻眸子俊，酬答舌头轻。
但愿身长健，看渠骨骼成。
痴儿
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诗歌内容
白话文翻译
痴愚的儿子才五岁，
气度格局已略显精明。
他摆弄笔墨向父亲夸耀，
窥看镜子模仿姐姐的样子。
顾盼间眼眸清秀俊朗，
应答时口齿伶俐轻快。
只愿他身体长久康健，
看他骨骼长成，茁壮成长。
英文翻译
My foolish son is just five years old,
Yet his bearing shows a hint of keen wit.
He wields a brush, boasting to his father,
Peeking at the mirror, mimicking his elder sister.
His gaze reveals bright, handsome eyes,
His replies are quick, his tongue nimble and light.
I only wish for him to grow strong and healthy,
To watch his frame and bones fully mature.
深度解构
孩童成长体现生命周期的早期阶段。
诗意解析
诗意概括
描绘幼童聪慧可爱，寄寓对孩童成长的期许。
格律
平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平。
仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平。
仄平平仄仄，平仄仄平平。
仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平。
仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平。
仄平平仄仄，平仄仄平平。
仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平。
本诗为五言律诗，押平声韵。
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