耸尽肩楼鹤样癯,断桥横路撚冰须。
梅花却笑君何事,锻得诗来瘦似吾。
耸尽肩楼鹤样癯,断桥横路撚冰须。
梅花却笑君何事,锻得诗来瘦似吾。
你耸着肩膀,像鹤一样清瘦,伫立在小楼旁,
在断桥上,横在路中,捻着如冰的胡须思量。
梅花却笑着问你:“究竟为了何事这般模样?”
“为锤炼诗句,我已消瘦得和你一样。”你回答。
Like a crane, gaunt and hunched, you stand by the tower high,
On the broken bridge, across the path, you twist your icy beard and sigh.
The plum blossom smiles and asks, "What keeps you so obsessed?"
"Forging poems has left me as thin as you," you confessed.
断桥横路撚冰须,象征创作面对环境周期的坚韧博弈。
刻画诗人如鹤般清瘦于断桥边吟咏梅花,突出其孤高自赏与苦吟之态。
本诗为七言绝句,押平声韵。
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