吟哦五字有规模,妙处时时亦起予。
送老百年将付汝,岂知颜路请吾车。
吟哦五字有规模,妙处时时亦起予。
送老百年将付汝,岂知颜路请吾车。
你吟咏五言诗已颇有章法规模,
那精妙之处也时时能给我启发。
我本想将这养老的百年时光托付给你,
哪知你竟像颜路请求孔子的车那样,先我而去。
Chanting five-word lines, a form you've mastered well,
Your subtle excellence often inspires me as well.
To spend my remaining years, I'd entrust them to you,
How could I know you'd request my carriage, like Yan Lu did do?
诗法规模是认知框架,妙处起予体现思维的博弈互动。
五言诗吟哦有法度,妙处时时启发我。
本诗为七言绝句,押平声韵。
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